Corpse - История изменений

Ghoul: removed the word "purchased" that appeared before corpses in the second sentence of the note because it sounded redundant.

2017-09-12T07:32:54Z

removed the word "purchased" that appeared before corpses in the second sentence of the note because it sounded redundant.

Ghoul: changed wording for readability

2017-09-12T07:31:10Z

changed wording for readability

Ghoul: edited for readability/flow again

2017-09-12T07:29:29Z

edited for readability/flow again

Ghoul: /* Corpse */ modified wording to improve flow.

2017-09-12T07:26:48Z

‎Corpse: modified wording to improve flow.

Ghoul: added header =Corpse= as the title

2017-09-12T07:15:47Z

added header =Corpse= as the title

Ghoul: Page created

2017-09-12T07:14:34Z

Page created

Новая страница

{{DISPLAYTITLE: ''Corpse''}}
Corpses are the object left behind when a player [[Death|dies]].
Gutting a corpse will reduce the player's [[Karma]] by 75 points.
You may open a corpse to loot any items the player had with them.
Corpses will disappear after 24 hours if not gutted or [[Grave|buried]].

'''NOTE:''' It is currently possible to put corpses up for sale in the [[Larisa|auction house]]. Purchased corpses that are older than 24 hours will disappear shortly after purchase. Sale of corpses in the auction house will be disallowed in the future.

← Предыдущая		Версия 07:32, 12 сентября 2017
Строка 5:		Строка 5:
	Corpses will disappear after 24 hours if not gutted or [[Grave\|buried]].		Corpses will disappear after 24 hours if not gutted or [[Grave\|buried]].

−	'''NOTE:''' It is currently possible to put corpses up for sale in the [[Larisa\|auction house]]. Corpses ~~purchased~~ that are older than 24 hours will disappear shortly after purchase. Sale of corpses in the auction house will be disallowed in the future.	+	'''NOTE:''' It is currently possible to put corpses up for sale in the [[Larisa\|auction house]]. Corpses that are older than 24 hours will disappear shortly after purchase. Sale of corpses in the auction house will be disallowed in the future.

@@ Строка 1: / Строка 1: @@
 =Corpse=
 Corpses are the lootable remains of [[Death|dead]] players.
-Gutting a corpse will reduce players' [[Karma]] by 75 points.
+Players who gut a corpse will have their [[Karma]] reduced by 75 points.
-Players may open a corpse to obtain any held items the deceased lost on death.
+Players can open a corpse to obtain any held items the deceased lost on death.
 Corpses will disappear after 24 hours if not gutted or [[Grave|buried]].
 '''NOTE:''' It is currently possible to put corpses up for sale in the [[Larisa|auction house]]. Corpses purchased that are older than 24 hours will disappear shortly after purchase. Sale of corpses in the auction house will be disallowed in the future.

@@ Строка 1: / Строка 1: @@
 =Corpse=
-A Corpse is the [[Death|deceased]] remains of a player.
+Corpses are the lootable remains of [[Death|dead]] players.
 Gutting a corpse will reduce players' [[Karma]] by 75 points.
 Players may open a corpse to obtain any held items the deceased lost on death.

@@ Строка 1: / Строка 1: @@
-{{DISPLAYTITLE: ''Corpse''}}
+=Corpse=
 Corpses are the object left behind when a player [[Death|dies]].
 Gutting a corpse will reduce the player's [[Karma]] by 75 points.